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| Haibun Challenge #1 |
Another challenge? Writing an every week haibun on a given prompt. Haibun is prose and poetry melted together and I think I will try that challenge. I hope I can keep on contributing to this haibun-challenge. OK Let’s go.
HAIBUN – MELT
After the rough and cold winter. Snow is finally melting. I can smell Spring and in wonder I will look to the sprouting trees and bushes as if I saw it for the first time.
I bow my head in front of Buddha who’s smile is seen again now the snow has melted.
I bow my head in front of Buddha who’s smile is seen again now the snow has melted.
finally again
I can see the smile of Buddha
the snow has gone
I can see the smile of Buddha
the snow has gone
(c) Chèvrefeuille 2013
This was a real honour! I appreciate that very much and see your touch in your haibun. I will link to here at the end of the week when I do a small summary.
ReplyDeleteThat is such a beautiful concept, the snow melting and the smile being seen again..
So lovely and spiritual. Glad to see you accepted the challenge
ReplyDeleteIt will be a good year!
ReplyDeletewonderful .. its like mirror at work .. poetry and prose !
ReplyDelete:)
Buddha shows his face
ReplyDeletegroundhog's shadow absent
good year to come
Yet another challenge. Perfect merge between prose and haiku.. Yes this is perfect.
Deep and spiritual
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done.
JzB
as if I saw it for the first time --- lovely
ReplyDeletei love the way you said it..how at the melting of the snow, Buddha's bright smile is once again revealed..
Spring is like a smile emerging and somehow seems connected with the happiness of the spirit in a Buddha way! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteAll the perfectly chosen words
ReplyDeletestrung together like pearls ♥
Snow or no snow, the Buddha smiles--you just may not see the smile!
ReplyDeleteDrumming haiku
Smile of Budhdha.. wow.. what a beautiful picture.. a beautiful haiku this.. I am happy to be here..KP.. hope you will too be happy visiting me here:
ReplyDeletehttp://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/02/heart-pumps-happiness.html
No able to leave comments nowadays.. rest assured you and your haiku are kept close to my heart..
RS:)